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Ellen
is on page 253 of 464
i don't know if the writing's improved or i don't notice as much now the plot has picked up. i love the cheesy one-liners too!!!!
— Jul 04, 2026 05:26AM
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Ellen
is on page 112 of 464
Something about the writing is irking me. I think it's too repetitive - unsure if it's the dual POV going over the same stuff we've already seen but in recollection, but I think phrases are just repeated frequently too close together. Feel like this is gonna be one of those that could easily cut a quarter of the pages and lose nothing
— Jun 23, 2026 12:32PM