Miriamgreen’s Reviews > When the Earl Met His Match > Status Update

Cry me a river, why don’t you? It’s overload, or too much too late.

“Do not leave me “
“I am weak to you. Phoebe… I am weak for you. “
But her poetry still ensnares.

It’s almost too little too late and so far as this reader is concerned, and once again, the narrative has been too front loaded to match the hind end what would’ve been a five star is no longer

Well, she waited long enough to give the reader the ending. Everyone knew she was coming from the very beginning.
“He was a damn fool. “
Oh no, here comes another twist, Phoebe has left.

The cardinal sin of an author is to stretch out the plot too long so that the reader can’t wait for the book to resolve into its happy ending. That has happened.

Back to what was in our face all the time, fear.

It is hard to swallow that Hugh is a blockhead, but apparently he is.
For him sentiment was just words. at 88% of the book gone…

“ do not expect me to love you forever when you are indifferent to me… I will not suffer for my heart to break daily. “
Who will break first her heart or Hugh?

He doesn’t kiss her when they make love anymore, this is intolerable to a reader of a romance, unless you are penning a cliffhanger

It looks like she is going to stretch this out to the last page for which I am unsatisfied

They fall into routine without the same passion as before, he kept to himself. It was a normal ton marriage.

George! An unlooked for stumbling block. Hugh questions why George was confident that she loved him.
So the jealousy… when she just didn’t care enough to answer him and Hugh didn’t get it