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claire
claire is on page 28 of 416
I am so TIRED of the “he’s brooding and has tattoos and wears all black and is HUUUGE and has a deep voice and is so mysterious and and and and” it is SO overdone and lazy

There’s no uniqueness to this character and it’s time for it to RETIRE
Jun 18, 2026 11:17AM
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claire is on page 223 of 416
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claire
claire is on page 215 of 416
Bad writing bad writing bad writing bad writing
9 hours, 15 min ago
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claire
claire is on page 190 of 416
Jun 20, 2026 05:00PM
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claire
claire is on page 171 of 416
I just can’t believe manhattan is all there’s left AND somehow, Central Park holds enough to sustain the entire island

The book mention chicken earlier, are you telling me there’s chickens running around Central Park?!

This better be propaganda told by the gov because I just cannot believe this is true
Jun 20, 2026 04:48PM
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claire
claire is on page 171 of 416
“Central Park tree farm…represents the sum total of the usable construction wood left in the world” HUH

“Without much wildlife left in the world, the city’s green spaces are carefully curated…offering sustenance and a suitable environment for a handful of species necessary for us to sustain life” HELLO

maybe it’s better to gloss over sooooome world building cause I have SO many questions now
Jun 20, 2026 04:47PM
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claire
claire is on page 107 of 416
“He really isn’t, but the vibes are immaculate” the vibes are immaculate the VIBES are IMMACULATE????! Why is TikTok slang in my YA dystopian book!!! Get rid of it please thank you!!
Jun 18, 2026 01:37PM
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claire
claire is on page 67 of 416
The similarities to divergent are … interesting
Jun 18, 2026 12:19PM
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