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Noe
Noe is 50% done
This started off so strong and I really want to see where it goes but the prose is just a bit too cold and technical for me 😭I understand the point is that baru has been stripped of any ability to develop a sense of self, but at the point where all she thinks about is math and political chess for hundreds of pages it starts to feel like poor character writing. I'm struggling to stay invested
16 hours, 21 min ago
The Traitor Baru Cormorant (The Masquerade, #1)

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