Jennifer’s Reviews > The Snow Globe > Status Update
Jennifer
is on page 105 of 434
Finding it hot and cold with respect to the story and writing.
— Apr 10, 2017 06:33PM
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Jennifer
is on page 240 of 434
Mish mash continues. I wish the author had done a better job of plotting out the story and removed some of the unnecessary pieces to simplify the overall piece.
— Apr 12, 2017 06:09AM
Jennifer
is on page 140 of 434
And it needs a good edit. So many commas in the wrong spot. And bad word choices.
— Apr 11, 2017 11:15AM
Jennifer
is on page 140 of 434
I really want to like this but there are so many contradictions and inconsistencies in the plot I keep getting annoyed with it and want to put it down.
— Apr 11, 2017 11:11AM
