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“Now she was the age Imelda had been when she'd met Frank and all of that had begun Her great love her life”

Shot me why don’t you

This was a gut punch of a reading session

I’m sobbing. This is agony

god this is so tragic :/

her and frank are breaking my heart :( they loved each other so bad :(

I didn't know if you'd come he whispered into her hair called you and you never answered
You drove over the phone she told him and as she said it she could feel a smile well up from her heart and break across her face You feckin' eejit she said

Ugh when will the Imelda POVs end :// It’s a shame because had they had punctuation, they would have been fun. But without them, it’s a headache

I HATE that her POV’s have ZEROOO PUNCTUATION. It’s obviously a narrative choice but it’s taking me out so much. It’s like one large run on sentence. And it’s for almost 200 pages . I’m only 50 ish pages in :(

oh no… don’t tell he’s going get baited on the internet:(