Shelbie’s Reviews > When the Tides Held the Moon > Status Update

I’m hating the writing and the sporadic Spanish sprinkled into every paragraph is jarring when there’s no translation. I also discovered this was originally written as fanfic for a Harry Potter parody I had read and hated back in 2021 so…I think this will be a DNF soon.

Still trying to figure out how “four horses all in a line pulling a carriage” is supposed to work.