Status Update

Ben Lilley is 25% done

Backtracking in plot. Boo.

— Mar 23, 2017 08:06PM

Like flag

Ben’s Previous Updates

Ben Lilley is 68% done

Needs to be tighter. Fewer POV shifts.

— Mar 28, 2017 09:34PM

Ben Lilley is 44% done

I'm bored. And I'm no longer sure where this is going.

— Mar 27, 2017 10:00PM

Ben Lilley is 44% done

I'm bored. And I'm no longer sure where this is going.

— Mar 27, 2017 10:00PM

Ben Lilley is 42% done

Baaaaaaahhhhh, this lull is killing me.

— Mar 26, 2017 10:57PM

Ben Lilley is 36% done

Lack of grounding, it's been all plot and no interpersonal development, and the plot is too slow.

— Mar 25, 2017 09:54PM

Ben Lilley is 33% done

Slowing down. I've questioned the feel of the world--modern meets old.

— Mar 23, 2017 11:04PM

No comments have been added yet.