Ian’s Reviews > Under the Volcano > Status Update

Chapter 2 🙌 the unsent letter from the Consul to Yvonne was intense.

Very dense and difficult, slow starting the flashback to M. Laurelle’s and the consul’s youth has been the most interesting part so far. To many digressions relax with the commas and the minor-detail asides, the plot needs to move forward!

Started slow, but now it’s picking up.