Kristi’s Reviews > The Secret Book of Flora Lea > Status Update

So if we remove Barnaby (Hazel's lame boyfriend) this book is instantly improved.

Not even 20% into the book and four F-bombs and a sex scene, all completely unnecessary and disjointed from the feel of the story. I'm getting a foreboding feeling that this book will be on the lazy writing, where they throw sensational things in for no purpose instead of writing better characters.

I want this story to be wonderful. Has anyone read it who thinks it's worth carrying on?