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Kiki
is 50% done
Am I only one who struggles with the chick being the grump of the story? I just feel like authors can never pull it off without the h being unlikable. I like the story, but so far she's coming off as ungrateful and the dude is really going out on a limb to help her and her daughter.
— Apr 12, 2026 04:56PM
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