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Javachix
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Though not a bad story, the way its written has me checking the cover to make sure its not a YA novel. Actually most YA novels I read are more intelligent than this. Too much holding, stroking, touching, crushing, jealousy, amongst the zombie slaying. It should and could be better. Im trying to ignore all the fluffy stuff and focus on the action.
— Mar 27, 2012 07:36AM
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Javachix
is on page 61 of 331
Seems like a good story line, but Im distracted by the somewhat "romance language" of the author. Why are the women constantly touching each other, hold hands and stroking each others hair? Why does she talk about her long raven tresses and her glowing cat like eyes? I want a Zombie story. Not this goofy stuff. Ill give it 2 more chapters and make my decision.
— Mar 26, 2012 05:53PM