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Yeahhhhhh I get that it's a love letter to books, and I like that, but this whole bit with Emily Henry is giving kissass ngl.
Idk the book is ok, but it might be a little too cheesy for me

"She turns the book over in her hand, the cover bright and colorful.
"Beach Read by Emily Henry...""
I'M IN HELL

Make it less jarring

I do wish that, when they do a flashback of her and Joe together when he's alive, there would be something to indicate it other than Joe being in the present tense. This is bc POV changes are done the same exact way: a break in the text, and an entirely new paragraph with a lead-in. Maybe if the flashbacks were in past tense, that would be better.

Ok, I don't think it's weird that she's not ready to get rid of some of her dead husband's things. It's only been 6 months! However, her talking to the urn isn't healthy

typo run-on

Typo run-on

There is NO FCKING WAY that this book just name-dropped Colleen Hoover omfg