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is 78% done
The book is at its weakest when it feels like the author has stopped writing from the POV of a 17-year-old girl and is writing from the POV of someone much older with an axe to grind (herself). I understand the impulse, but it takes me out of the story again and again.
— Mar 29, 2026 03:51AM
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