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Another inconsistency, Sydney mentioned in chapter one at dinner that she was married for 4 years. During her srgument with Brian in chapter 3 she says 5 years married.
— Mar 26, 2012 11:10AM
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Adrian Major Hope
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I'm disappointed with the book, the storyline has potential but the attention to details, typos and goof ups are far too many.
— Mar 27, 2012 11:15AM
Adrian Major Hope
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The typos are starting to reallu bug me. They are absolutely careless mistakes that should have been fixed.
— Mar 27, 2012 10:43AM
Adrian Major Hope
is 27% done
I'm already finding some errors in spelling and inconsistencies in the storyline. The girl Britney mentioned how she had no ring and was okay with it as long as he kept buying her nice things. Then a chapter later her name changed to Brittany and she has been married for six months. The problem is that chapter 2 takes place a few minutes after chapter 1.
— Mar 26, 2012 10:48AM
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Mar 26, 2012 04:01PM
Real readers pick up on things like that and it ruins the storyline. Authors need to pay for great proof readers!
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Yes girl! I can't get past it. I actually scrolled back to make sure I wasn't mistaken but nope the author goofed on that one. It will bug me until the end lol
