Kaylene Weimer’s Reviews > A Gloom in the Bones > Status Update

There’s so much juicy tension and build up between Feras and Clara that the moment when they finally come together feels a little underwhelming. Like it could’ve stood to be a tiny bit spicier.

I wish the trials had more details and went on a smidge longer, they were so interesting.

“I want to offer you a challenge” this is scene is making my heart race

Pg 24 “torture” should be “tortured”

Pg 22 misspell “trobbed” should be “throbbed”

Now that the first chapter has started it’s a bit easier to read. Like it’s been translated better. And it is very intriguing!

It is reading sort of.. awkwardly. But I believe that is because of it being translated from Italian to English. It could be wise for the author to invest in having someone fluent in both Italian and English to translate it before its release.

Inspired by Alice in Wonderland - translated from Italian to English so there may be errors.