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This is such a good novel. Still, if you're going to have one of your main characters be foreign and actually use some of the words of that language, why wouldn't you have them checked by a native speaker? Having the character hit her head and say 'to swear' is pretty embarrassing and really takes the reader out of the story. Sigh.
Mar 21, 2026 04:26AM
The Hand That First Held Mine

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