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hebhob
is on page 290 of 512
this book reads like a six year old discovered the word shit for the first time and has now decided to use it in every other sentence. its juvenile and it’s frustrating, especially given how seriously the story seems to take itself. there’s a way to nail that balance (see: the brightest sword), but this ain’t it
— Mar 20, 2026 09:57PM
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hebhob
is on page 25 of 512
i am 25 pages/4 chapters in and i’m already sick of vera. like we get it, people don’t notice you. you’re ordinary. but does it need to come up once every 5 pages???
— Mar 18, 2026 07:12PM
