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Hmmm, while I appreciate the command in language and vocabulary, the sentence structures often feel long and monotonous.. sentences feel like long spaghetti strings. Not so much appreciating the three first main characters’ shared trait of degrading themselves. There is a lot of self-pity, frustration and isolation there and little problem solving.
13 hours, 20 min ago
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