Nelly Chopra’s Reviews > Go as a River > Status Update

Victoria has runaway — living in the hut that Wil built deep in the forest. Struggling to survive — she is reconsidering whether she can actually live off the land and have a baby in a place where the elements and wildlife are unpredictable.

Victoria officially started seeing Wil. Snuck out to be with him did a night while her dad and brother Seth were herding cattle for rhe neighbors. Uncle OG suspects her indiscretion.

Great. Beautifully written. Great development of Victoria as a character as she describes the turmoil she lives with her brother, dad, and uncle. Writer does a good job developing her present day character through period flashbacks.