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Making a character with the last name Feeney (even if you’re spelling it slightly differently) the big bully of your novel feels like such absolute blasphemy. I just. How darrreeee.

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Why are we randomly, out of nowhere, getting a Johnny POV? 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

This has such a bad pacing problem. Idk how long I can go.

I mean, seriously—wtf is this?

“I don’t trust someone who doesn’t read!! Who doesn’t like knowledge?!? You lack empathy! Books are mirrors into our souls so anyone who doesn’t read is a walking ghost.”

-sigh- I was really excited to start reading this, but if the start is anything to go by, I have a feeling I’m going to be disappointed. It’s a shame, but the writing is awkward. People don’t talk like this.