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I’m probably DNF’ this book. So far the story is choppy and doesn’t make a whole lot of sense. The characters haven’t actually built a relationship (love/hate) and I don’t understand how the author keeps jumping from scene to scene but not connecting them. The details also don’t add to the story but just make it feel more choppy.
— Mar 18, 2026 05:29AM

