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Eva
is on page 44 of 160
I'll admit that going back and rereading most of the beginning did help me finally make sense of what is going on (I hope), but I still think this is written in an incredibly choppy way for some reason
— Mar 17, 2026 03:05PM
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Eva
is on page 22 of 160
I'm sorry but this is already abysmal, there are parts where I have no idea what emotion is trying to be conveyed and I can only assume that "awkward" and "slightly confusing" wasn't the intent
— Mar 17, 2026 04:46AM

