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For St. Pats…
Sisters 2.5/5
This story is a realistic look at someone’s thoughts, in that, noone actually self-narrates. Which is an interesting way to write, but confusing to read. No character backstory, they just show up, interact, our narrator sees it, and then it ends and I don’t know why.
— 22 hours, 51 min ago
Sisters 2.5/5
This story is a realistic look at someone’s thoughts, in that, noone actually self-narrates. Which is an interesting way to write, but confusing to read. No character backstory, they just show up, interact, our narrator sees it, and then it ends and I don’t know why.
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Araby: 6/5
“I did not know whether I would ever speak to her or not or, if I spoke to her, how I could tell her of my confused adoration”
Perfectly describes the feeling of a childhood crush, the efforts a boy will go to, and the pain it can cause. Joyce doesn’t do resolutions. He just leaves you holding his character’s feeling.
— 2 hours, 1 min ago
“I did not know whether I would ever speak to her or not or, if I spoke to her, how I could tell her of my confused adoration”
Perfectly describes the feeling of a childhood crush, the efforts a boy will go to, and the pain it can cause. Joyce doesn’t do resolutions. He just leaves you holding his character’s feeling.
Joey Dord
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The Encounter 3.5/5
1890s stranger danger. Really great tension development, and a lot left unsaid. Was going to be a 3 cause some details earlier in the story didnt amount to anything, but their relevance just clicked to me. Green eyes=creep
— 22 hours, 50 min ago
1890s stranger danger. Really great tension development, and a lot left unsaid. Was going to be a 3 cause some details earlier in the story didnt amount to anything, but their relevance just clicked to me. Green eyes=creep
