Michelle’s Reviews > Welcome to Pandorient > Status Update
Michelle
is 99% done
City and creature names are a stutter to pronounce. It ruins the flow of a book. I don’t love it- but there is something here.
In the new world she saves her mom’s friend from being poisoned. The fox is making dream sand up in the attic. Accidentally switched the pipes. He seemed sorry? But then attacked the kids. Weird. I think he’s “good.”
Octopus neighbor said don’t trust anyone.
— Mar 13, 2026 12:16AM
In the new world she saves her mom’s friend from being poisoned. The fox is making dream sand up in the attic. Accidentally switched the pipes. He seemed sorry? But then attacked the kids. Weird. I think he’s “good.”
Octopus neighbor said don’t trust anyone.
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