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D'oh! I totally f'ed up the pasting on the ending of this story. UGH. :(
— Mar 22, 2012 08:51PM
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This is so me: "Obviously, there was no man out there who could deal with my need for space and time to myself. They claimed they could. Maybe in the beginning, they even tried..."
— Mar 22, 2012 10:33AM
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"It sounded so stupid when I tried to explain it to someone. I didn't feel qualified to write something that complex and detailed and imaginative... I just didn't have that spark of creative genius."
— Mar 21, 2012 07:16PM
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Perfect - romantic suspense is just what I wanted to read, plus this is off to a smokin' hot start.
— Mar 21, 2012 07:09PM
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Mar 22, 2012 08:07PM
Not really. Weird use of past progressive tense (ie was standing) makes it feel that way.
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I obviously should have paid closer attention in high school English!
*snort* The long sex scenes in the middle of worrying about getting caught are making me nuts.
Kate wrote: "*snort* The long sex scenes in the middle of worrying about getting caught are making me nuts."They did me, too, but now I'm closing in on the end!
Lou wrote: "I have fondness for past progressive. Nobody else does though."LOL! It was odd...
