Sandra’s Reviews > The Peculiar Incident on Shady Street > Status Update
Sandra
is 82% done
Seriously? Haunted house for days on end and it doesn't occur that the ghost lived or died there?
— Mar 11, 2026 01:47PM
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Sandra
is 50% done
I think the biggest issue besides the proofreading is the first person perspective. It doesn't sound like a kid. A limited omniscient narrator wouldn't have to sound accurately tweenish.
— Mar 06, 2026 12:32PM
Sandra
is 5% done
Wait. 15 minutes in, 'I didn't even brush my teeth last night, then last night when I brushed my teeth'
Besides the narrator being annoying, this isn't feeling promising.
— Mar 04, 2026 01:50PM
Besides the narrator being annoying, this isn't feeling promising.
