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If I can get over 300 pages into your novel and the plot can be summed up so far as "You're an asshole, I LOVE YOU." then you're doing something wrong.
— Mar 21, 2012 11:51PM
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Addison
is on page 390 of 498
Almost 400 pages in and the real conflict finally kicks in! It's about fucking time.
— Mar 22, 2012 04:22PM
Addison
is on page 140 of 498
I think one of my main problems with this book is that it's what I've started calling "needlessly descriptive". Everything is described, regardless of its bearing to the story. I mean, I fucking love adjectives too but why describe the entire office of the highschool if we're going to spend less than two scenes there? That makes no sense.
— Mar 21, 2012 06:53PM
Addison
is on page 110 of 498
Yep! I was right. These books seem to get even worse as I get older and more experienced with picking books apart.
— Mar 21, 2012 04:00PM
Addison
is on page 12 of 498
All right, Twilight. I'm going to force myself to re-read you while my friends snicker in amusement because I have a feeling you'll be even worse now that I'm older.
— Mar 20, 2012 08:03PM
