Tanya T.’s Reviews > Inherit the Stars > Status Update

This book has plot holes bigger than Swiss Cheese.

Age your characters up to late twenties and early thirties but still act like two horny teenagers....

I'm trying to finish by tomorrow since I am dragging my feet but this book is soooo undercooked. It has a good idea but so undeveloped.

This book is so undercooked.

Lucien supposed to give Mamoru Chiba/Tuxedo Mask vibes ( which is pretty much how this book has been marketed as such) but I'm getting Erik/Phantom of the Opera Vibes with this white mask that covers half his face like Erik does. Mamo's Mask just cover his eyes like Batman.

I can't belive I am saying this because I'm a fast pace girle but the pace of this is too fast in the sense of revealing certain things. Like I expected the FMC real identity to be the best kept known secret(aka the FMC doesn't realize that everyone knows who she is while she is trying to keep it hidden) but not revealed this early in the book.

I don't know why I am struggling to get really locked in to this.