Alison Beechner’s Reviews > Golden Blood > Status Update

If touching takes a person with you, and the father pulls them back suddenly, what keeps them from bringing the pain back to the future

I dont think the author is American. Some phrasing is either typoed or diff than Americans. Like "that weed'

Plot hole.. why wouldn't they have pre-made excuses to tell"friends" when the feeling is coming on. I mean she could just say she has IBS and sometimes has to suddenly sirens a lot of time in the bathroom.

This may be explained later, but for someone so obsessed with their secrecy, why would the father plan time trips during the school day at all? Why not just on weekends? Or why not homeschool the kids? Why not make a family appointment and let everyone know when and where and what they are going for?

I dont know why I'm still reading this. It's nowhere near as good as The Space Between.
Things that bug me: the Jordan character doesn't feel realistic to me. I keep imagining a 1950s greaser group.
Too many typos/ tiny editing mistakes