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Mari
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'After everything that he has done, this seems like fair restitution.' Why does the mermaid care? She let her children eat an entire kingdom's worth of people. After that, why does she care about anything?
— Mar 05, 2026 05:44PM
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Mari
is on page 46 of 128
'I think of the lynx beneath the river, its veins crystallizing' somehow the animal death offends and upsets me more than the mass murder/cannibalism and the child necromancy cult
— Mar 05, 2026 05:16PM
Mari
is on page 44 of 128
'I wonder why they tolerate my presence. After all, I am a distillation of their failure, the mother of the plague they could not stop.' I WONDER, TOO
— Mar 05, 2026 05:12PM
Mari
is on page 44 of 128
Why include a paragraph of a lynx falling into a river and drowning if the characters aren't even going to acknowledge it? What is the purpose?
— Mar 05, 2026 05:11PM
Mari
is on page 38 of 128
[plague doctor voice] I can excuse the mermaid babies committing genocide on an entire kingdom, but I draw the line at the child torture cult!
— Mar 05, 2026 04:58PM
