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"She lay there on the bed in the lamplight, as naked and glistening as a pearl."

"...a cold-eyed hatchet-faced man, as lean as a rake and as hard as the manager of a loan office."

"The boy stood glaring at him with sharp black eyes in a face as hard and white as cold mutton fat."

"Ohls looked at him silently, his pale eyebrows bristling and stiff and round like the little vegetable brushes the FUller Brush man gives away."

"He would be as cold as ice and as stiff as a board."

"'Don't kid me, son. The fag gave you one. You've got a nice clean manly little room in there. [...] He was like Caesar, a husband to women and a wife to men. Think I can't figure people like him and you out?'
[...] I backstepped fast enough to keep from falling, but I took plenty of the punch. It was meant to be a hard one, but a pansy has no iron in his bones, whatever he looks like."

Wow. Absolutely abhorrent.

"She was as limp as a fresh-killed rabbit."

"Her eyes became narrow and and almost as black and as shallow as enamel on a cafeteria tray."

Not a simile, just a nasty segment I want to save for later:

"The giggles stopped dead, but she didn't mind the slap any more than last night. Probably all her boy friends got around to slapping her sooner or later. I could understand how they might."

Yay domestic abuse!

"The giggle got louder and ran around the corners of the room like rats behind the wainscoting."