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The way lore of this world is being established/delivered feels slightly on the info-dumpy side of things. The lore is interesting and the world seems to have a sense of history, but I feel it's just a touch heavy handed, or delivered earlier than it needed to be.

One of the worst names for a protagonist, hands down! "Nail"
Like, doesnt matter how you pronounce it, it's always gonna be NAIL!

Shawcroft reminds me of Brom, not that he is the only other keeper of the chosen one I've read.
I always wonder, why do these characters always have to be such utter asses?!?!
I know it's a trope and all but you could do the whole mysterious thing without being so harsh to the young chosen one, can't you? 😅