Haley’s Reviews > The Poet Empress > Status Update

Bruh. This main character is having a rough time for NO REASON. Book reads like day one, day two, which is annoying. There's no true flow between days or sense of how much time had passed. The FMC, who is she? She could be made of cardboard and I wouldn't know. There's no established reason to care about ANYONE because....well, it wasnt established.

Moving a bit fast. I think we're skipping details. Beginning needs more fleshed out.