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Jayson
is finished

Notes:
(1) Feels not-coherent (disparate parts),
like patchwork/quilted random art.
- Could be repurposed sketches/pieces.
- All solid/pleasing strange caprices.
(2) Lyrically, it's awful hazy.
- Rhyming nonsense words is lazy.
- It doesn't really have a point.
- Thematically feels out of joint.
(3) Though, story-wise, it doesn't jive,
the art is great and where it thrives.
— Feb 25, 2026 10:00AM

Notes:
(1) Feels not-coherent (disparate parts),
like patchwork/quilted random art.
- Could be repurposed sketches/pieces.
- All solid/pleasing strange caprices.
(2) Lyrically, it's awful hazy.
- Rhyming nonsense words is lazy.
- It doesn't really have a point.
- Thematically feels out of joint.
(3) Though, story-wise, it doesn't jive,
the art is great and where it thrives.
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