Alicia Bell’s Reviews > Vigil > Status Update

I’m really not loving it. I think the story could be good, but the style in which it’s written… it’s just not working for me. I’m finding the choppiness exhausting. It’s hard to keep track of what is going on. I have to really keep focused and paying attention or I just find myself lost. It’s hard to even visualize what’s going on because I’m so focused on the words.