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Oh. Oh my. That was actually a nicely written love scene

Curious to see where this goes but Jesus the immaturity is annoying as hell

Interesting world building but everyone is so immature. Bugs the hell out of me.

Don’t know what it exactly is, but feels very amateurish. Like someone wrote it for a younger crowd the decided to “edge it up” with swear words and sex.