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Jasmin Kapsal
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Well, I don’t know what to think so far. The story keeps jumping forward and cutting between different scenes so it’s kinda confusing. Also, idk if it’s just me, but the basic descriptions of Glooscap and Malsumis confused me when Xavier began to talk more about them. Also why haven’t we heard of this belief before? Especially if it’s so important to Xavier.

I do quite like the drawings though
Feb 16, 2026 01:21PM
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 77 of 413
I really don’t like the attitude of some of the Stalker Force Members.Sure the Garuda and Naga would have died anyways by the Utahraptors but they didn’t have to make the suffering worse,especially after they called a truce.

I wonder if we’ll hear about Nagarjuna and his son again, I would like to.They got incredibly lucky.

I like Phurong a lot to be honest, I think she’s good for Nguyen. I hope they live
11 hours, 56 min ago
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 59 of 413
I’m glad that Nguyen has found someone he can trust and turn to. I had enough of him being abused in the last book and it’s nice to see him have some semblance of happiness. Is what I would say if he wasn’t a complete asshole. Wtf is he doing treating her like that? What has he become? Honestly she’s right and I’m glad she said that to him. Like why is he being so toxic?
12 hours, 25 min ago
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 38 of 413
I think what separates Xipetotec from the other raptor antagonists is that we see him make associations between things and learn. In reading his backstory, you can kinda sympathise with him because he’s not killing for the sake of it, he’s killing to sustain his colony. I particularly liked that he spared Zawygi, being intelligent like this makes his character more scary. Kinda makes him unpredictable
Feb 20, 2026 10:02AM
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 17 of 413
I have decided to restart the book as I felt as if maybe I’d missed something? Or maybe the writing was just bad…

Anyways, I enjoyed reading about Xipetotec. For some reason his personality and intelligence seems more realistic than Sobek’s.

I still don’t get why there was 4 different raptors in the Stupa? Kinda weird but other than that, the story is reading smoothly. Hopefully it continues that way
Feb 19, 2026 02:17PM
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 74 of 413
I enjoyed these chapters a bit more than the last ones but I’m still getting lost between the constant location and time skips. I understand where Pettus is coming from and what he’s trying to do but it doesn’t translate well.

Again I feel as if a lot of the cultural beliefs, deities/gods and building names aren’t being described well enough, leading to confusion and a less smooth reading experience.
Feb 18, 2026 11:00AM
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Jasmin Kapsal
Jasmin Kapsal is on page 54 of 413
I enjoyed reading about Xipetotec and the migration of his colony. I’m liking him more than Sobek, I feel like he’s more intelligent and kinda logical

But also wtf did I just read. Why is Nguyen acting like this tf? He is genuinely crazy. What is even going on with him and Phuong Hoang? Their relationship is horrible. Reading this last chapter was actual painful. I was cringing so much, like what is going on?
Feb 17, 2026 02:18PM
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