Emmaline Savidge’s Reviews > Motor City Love Song > Status Update

I really liked the POV shift so that we could better understand Paloma, but the cheating/secret child reveal is a big ol nope for me. It’s not that we can’t explore the idea but I think it’s important to think about how this feeds into broader narratives about bi women being cheaters. It just feels like the author needed to have a deeper reason to justify Paloma leaving and didn’t think if it was logical.