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Mars
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I personally would prefer if there was just a tiny bit of unsureness before they both dived into it. The obsession from Enzo didnt feel like one because we didnt feel the two years he spent pinning over Zara, if you know what
I mean.
— Feb 12, 2026 08:57AM
I mean.
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Mars
is 78% done
Hate to break it to you sweetheart but as part of the mafia, you will always look over your shoulder for blood. That life is about that
— Feb 13, 2026 09:35AM
Mars
is 75% done
Zara’s wilderness and strength is not that portrayed on the book or I need them to be pointed out to me. I understand she ran away but apart from that, what else? I would have loved to see her being more of a badass, instead we’re left assuming with our imagination
— Feb 13, 2026 06:35AM
Mars
is on page 279 of 404
We should have gotten more fight, maybe denial from Zara, even if they had sex, but with them now saying “I love you” toneach other, it feels rushed, it falls flat and it just feels like its done as an “I owe the readers” this scene.
— Feb 12, 2026 08:56AM
Mars
is on page 167 of 404
I like how he’s bent over wanting her and taking her no matter what. Looking forward to seeing how she will react. I mean it’s getting rid of one prisoner to be married to the next
— Feb 11, 2026 11:31AM

