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M. Langlinais
is on page 208 of 416
Why does she suggest he make an index card for the doll when he already said he’d made an index card for the doll? Seriously, who “edited” this? They did a crap job with continuity.
— 19 hours, 27 min ago
M. Langlinais
is on page 186 of 416
Now I’m in an Audi commercial. For real, did they pay for this placement?
— 19 hours, 59 min ago
M. Langlinais
is on page 142 of 416
Is this supposed to be banter? It’s not cute or funny or even very distinctive.
— Feb 08, 2026 09:44PM
M. Langlinais
is on page 111 of 416
He was standing by the driver’s side door then suddenly opening the passenger side door for her? And walking back around the truck? Editor??
— Feb 07, 2026 10:10PM
M. Langlinais
is on page 24 of 416
It’s pretty clear I’m missing some context from previous books but I will plow ahead regardless. Meanwhile, ma’am, there should be concept art for what the house will look like?
— Feb 05, 2026 03:39PM

