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She.
A macho man.
And a twink.
Ok... so far, I'm not loving it. The writing is good. The chapters are too long, and I don't really care for these characters, especially the gay guy. He is supposed to be the comedy relief but it isn't funny. I hate failed attempts of funny moments. Also why would you be cracking jokes after making you and your uncle get captured to be gladiators/slaves??? Hello?
— Feb 08, 2026 06:07AM
A macho man.
And a twink.
Ok... so far, I'm not loving it. The writing is good. The chapters are too long, and I don't really care for these characters, especially the gay guy. He is supposed to be the comedy relief but it isn't funny. I hate failed attempts of funny moments. Also why would you be cracking jokes after making you and your uncle get captured to be gladiators/slaves??? Hello?
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