kari’s Reviews > The Staircase in the Woods > Status Update
kari
is 39% done
The over explaining of things is also a bit much. It would be nice if he would trust our intelligence. We remember that thing from a couple pages ago, don’t worry
— 6 hours, 35 min ago
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kari
is 39% done
The characters are flat and kinda caricatures (lore), but it’s sweet when they’re nice to each other. Very crude. A lot of swearing and sexual references when there doesn’t need to be. The dialogue isn’t very believable. Meme speak keeps being used in inappropriate times “you’re in your Diet Coke era” “chaotic neutral” “unalived”
— 6 hours, 56 min ago
