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What, pray tell, was the point of taking it all out if you're going to put it back 5 minutes later??? I could understand if it was bait but it made no difference in how they handled the intruders so... it was pointless.

Great. The minute Meg sneezes, the nearest wolf starts howling. But now she's having bad premonitions and the one wolf who sees it is staying quiet. Probably so she can prove she is in control of her gift compared to the last episode.

Ah, of course, Terra Indigene humour, perfect for a developing relationship between him and Meg - a joke about how Simon isn't interested in human breasts unless he can eat them. I think it's trying to set up their relationship to have little to none sexual components but I don't feel this is the way to go about it.

"Like a squirrel that fell out of a tree and now is pretending it meant to do that." - this is the first TI phrase I actually find funny. I don't think squirrels feel embarrassed but it makes a certain sense and it's not too mean. It's downright observant of him - considering it's Simon.

Wau, thank you for spelling out why you killed off Heather. I am glad to be trusted, as a reader, to understand the situation without something hand-feeding me conclusions.

Human female pack is expanding! And taking names!! Muhahaha!!!

I also feel like the one thing keeping Meg as independent as she is is that everyone thinks she's fragile so they can't grab her or push her around physically. That's just sad.

Humans are difficult to deal with when you can't eat them or bite them. Right. So you're saying you are incapable of dealing with humans. But they have to deal with you. Why does it feel like the mental age of Terra Indigenes is going down every few chapters? Why am I interpreting their annoying habits as being immature? Why do they have to be different in such a "childlish"+"male" way?

I think I get the problem now - they claim they eat humans but when I see a human that should be eaten, they don't bother. All they're doing is getting my hopes up. Tsk.

Right, of course, the 7 year old girl whose mother just died and the prophet who spent her 23 years in prison-hell-compnound are responsible for the incident, Nathan, the older wolf, is the victim. Thank you for pointing that out.