Olga’s Reviews > For Whom the Belle Tolls > Status Update

I like it. I see how it is her first book and how she might or might not become a better writer in the future. She needs to show more than tell (“a sculpture like she never seen before”) and work on her descriptions but Hell’s rules and structures and people are wonderful. Romance is great, I realize I am sus of enemies to lovers but I love horny friends to lovers. Hopeful and sweet.

It is better without descriptions. It is simple but some of the best joys are the simple ones. It is such a sweet joy to feel horny from someone’s presence and be reciprocated. That makes me happy and that makes me sad as well.

Very fun

So far I am only not fond of descriptions of places, they do not work for me. They are designed for someone to imagine the place and I am not the person for whom this works. I like evocative descriptions of spaces, not literal.

I want to like this book because the edition is so beautiful