Bryson Smith’s Reviews > Wait Till Helen Comes > Status Update
Bryson Smith
is on page 178 of 184
One way I would revise my book is adding more exciting details to the begging and middle of the book. This book was really slow at the begging and middle but the last 40 pages are good. If I was the author I would add some exciting parts to the first 140 pages so it will keep the reader interested.
— Jan 30, 2017 10:03AM
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Bryson Smith
is on page 153 of 184
So far Wait Till Helen Comes is a book that is really slow and is trying really hard to be scary but is failing.
— Jan 23, 2017 09:54AM
Bryson Smith
is on page 153 of 184
So far Wait Till Helen Comes is a book that is really slow and is trying really hard to be scary but is failing.
— Jan 23, 2017 09:54AM
Bryson Smith
is on page 153 of 184
So far Wait Till Helen comes is a slow moving book that is trying really hard to be scary but is not.
— Jan 23, 2017 09:51AM
