Crystal Jenkins’s Reviews > A Curse of Storms and Scorn: A Dark Fantasy Romance > Status Update

I finally figured out what’s bothering me so much about this book: the character isn’t written to FEEL emotions. She only observes and reacts, like a robot or a sociopath . I don’t think she’s supposed to be one, obviously, but the author does not SHOW her expressing emotions and emotional reactions for the majority of the interactions she’s had the require them.

🙄😮‍💨 So far this story lacks any kind of depth. Like the fact that everyone got pissed at her, including the commander, over a whistle. 😒 Be for real. I’m going to try and push through but if the interactions don’t have more actual weight, depth and risk soon I’m not going to waste my time.