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criispy
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Insufferable dialogue. The idea is so cool and original and then it’s smothered in INSUFFERABLE dialogue. It’s like having a really good sandwich except it has mustard on it. You cant take it off the sandwich and now all the flavors are ruined. And the structural integrity. Cuz soggy
Jan 21, 2026 11:52PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)

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criispy
criispy is on page 240 of 718
I wish someone had told me this was just like… uhhhh… terrible? The dialogue is terrible? The book itself is so beautiful and the plot is interesting and the story-weaving is beautifully done and then the dialogue takes a shit on all of it. Sigh
Nov 19, 2025 06:35PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


criispy
criispy is on page 130 of 718
Lowkey the last airbender meets house of the dragon, and not a bad premise. I just can’t forgive the sarah j maasification of female-lead fantasy books 😭 like jesus christ if you tell me one more time that this woman’s heart is calloused beyond recognition and she’s a revenge-driven beauty who’s hiding her true identity from the world I’m going to lose it. I’m so sick of this repackaged archetype 😴
Nov 15, 2025 04:03PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)


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