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Chapter 2: OK so if Chapter 1 is the "lead in" then Chapter 2 is definitely the "hook" because holy f**k was that insane.
— Jan 17, 2026 05:19AM
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Declan Liam Mckendrick
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Chapter 3: I love the Worldbuilding and the quirkiness of the characters, but I'm struggling to connect with this MC. As a reader I feel a little too detached from his thoughts/feelings/backstory.
— Jan 20, 2026 03:49AM
Declan Liam Mckendrick
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Chapter 1: As opening chapters go, I honestly don't know how to feel about it. It was good, it was gripping, but it wasnt "hey, this is a book you NEED to read".
— Jan 17, 2026 04:48AM
Declan Liam Mckendrick
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Love the way this is playing out so far, remindes me a lot of 'Necroscope' in both feel and tone.
— Jan 16, 2026 03:12AM
Declan Liam Mckendrick
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"...and his tendency now was to expect savagery as surely as sunrises and sunsets." - Dean Koontz, Dark Rivers Of The Heart
That is such an interesting way to describe Trauma Response and I totally get the mentally behind it. It's one of those quotes where you go "that's exactly how it feels, but I've never thought of it like that".
— Jan 16, 2026 02:54AM
That is such an interesting way to describe Trauma Response and I totally get the mentally behind it. It's one of those quotes where you go "that's exactly how it feels, but I've never thought of it like that".
Declan Liam Mckendrick
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Interesting opening, not sure how I'm suppost to feel about this MC.
— Jan 15, 2026 04:31AM
