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is 54% done
Not a fan of the second person narration but it’s not a deal breaker.
One small criticism, there are too many similes, sometimes unnecessary, imo. Come off as a little bloated.
— Jan 15, 2026 08:03AM
One small criticism, there are too many similes, sometimes unnecessary, imo. Come off as a little bloated.
